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A portrait to share

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4 years 9 months ago #2431 by Christian Udarbe
So, I don't remember the last time I've been here. HAHAHAH anyways, time to share a portrait of my classmate. Trying my best to get my workflow up and running again, but classes sure has been evil to me.

I realized that I have been very rusty in my editing, and let even my shooting, so there's much I need to learn all over again.

As always, feedback, good or bad, are welcomed.


Nothing's So Loud As Hearing When She Lies by Bright Ideas with Chan Udarbe , on Flickr

Shooting Information:

Nikon D5000
Sigma 30mm f/1.4
Aperture Priority
1/60th @ f/5.6
ISO 1000
Flash Fired


Post Processing Information:

Adobe Lightroom 4
Nik Software Color Efex Pro 4
Cropped


Nothing's So Loud As Hearing When She Lies by Bright Ideas with Chan Udarbe , on Flickr

Shooting Information:

Nikon D5000
Sigma 30mm f/1.4
Aperture Priority
1/60th @ f/5.6
ISO 1000
Flash Fired


Post Processing Information:

Adobe Lightroom 4
Nik Software Color Efex Pro 4
Cropped


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4 years 9 months ago #2432 by dave seymour
B) works for me nice shot

7D. 24-105L.
50mm f1.8
100-400 f4.5.6 IS
430exii.

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4 years 9 months ago #2435 by Christian Udarbe
Thanks, Dave ;)


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4 years 9 months ago #2442 by Bill
Christian

I like the photo overall, good composition

One the color photo, The lighting on the model looks a little harsh. I think that's the look that you were going for on this one, but maybe softened or burned a little. The photo looks a little soft to me, I think the face could be a little sharper. I'm not sure why the shadow bother me, it seems to distract me for the main point of focus.

On the B&W- I like hi key of the with in the color version and would like to have seen that in the B&W version. I like the softer lighting this one has. I think there might be a little too much contrast on this one, it makes the model look pasted into the scene.

nice job overall :D
-Bill

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4 years 9 months ago #2445 by Christian Udarbe
Thanks Bill!

Yep, those 2 photos I was experimenting with different post processes and ended up with those results.

I will keep those tips in mind next time I shoot and edit similar shots in the future =]

Thanks again!


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