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A Portait for Greg to tear apart in his 30 video

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3 years 2 months ago - 3 years 2 months ago #5577 by jerry
I took this for a intro to Photography class a few years ago. Teacher said it was his favorite portrait and one of his overall favorites. So I thought I would post it here for Greg to tear apart (hopefully not to terribly torn apart :S). I even added my watermark.

So Greg: have at it if you wish, I have my big boy undies on.



Kid Portrait by jerryfictum , on Flickr
Last Edit: 3 years 2 months ago by jerry.

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3 years 2 months ago #5578 by Brent Ross
becase her head is tucked back, it makes her neck look large and cheeks look large. I would have used the reshape tool to correct that. I'm so not a face of the isolated colour. Could use more detail in her hair with some localized contrast.

Other than that It is technically good. If I were her, I would be pleased with the photo

I'm curious to see what greg says

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