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Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2012

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Shots from a local park this weekend tell me what you think.


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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2015

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Sweet looking images Bill :)

For image 1, 3,4,5. They are, for me, a little too green which knocks me off a bit.

The detail in the image is great. Love the last 2 images :)

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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2018

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Thanks Roy,

I was debating on the green myself and trying to decide whether or not to take some out or not. Guess I pull some out and see what they look like :cheer:
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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2021

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You know Bill,

I am curious about the following. What if you take out some green. Add a slight more contrast to it, sharpen it a bit and put some clarity on it?

:)

Just my 2 and a halve cents :)
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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2024

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so I only had time tonight to mess with one, I liked where you were headed Roy. I couldn't get the green to cooperate...so who needs green anyways :whistle:


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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2030

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Haha! Selective color.

Well!, euhm. This is the other side of the image. I am not a selective color shooter so this is not my style of photography ;)

But i think its fun ;)

Anyway, if you want.. i am willing to edit Your RAW file... And see what i can do with it...?

You can send it to This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it. (yes... .nl between it..)

Only if you want :)

I will not reproduce it or what ever. Its your images and it will stay that way.

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Roy
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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2188

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I had some time to mess around a little more what do you think?


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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2189

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They look well Bill, good job. :)

The first one is a big improvement, I think.

I like the second one too. However, in my opinion, the vignette is a little too harsh, but that is just personal preference.

Nice job again. :side:
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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2191

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Good shots there, Bill

For the first set of photos, I'd say a tad more contrast to boost the emphasis on the subject, but when raising the contrast, take note of the colors, some might become quite saturated, so you might want to lessen the greens, since it is mostly the color on the frames.

For the second set, lessen your vignette... other than that, it has been improved from the first set. =D

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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2193

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thanks for the props and the critiques :woohoo:
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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2194

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Hi Bill,

Great improvement. And yes, i have to say, i agree with Conor, as well as with Christian.

However, they look very good and go on with this. On the next time, a tad less green :)

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Re: Shots from this weekend 4 years 3 months ago #2212

3+5 look oversharpened to me....
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