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TOPIC: Critique: "Monkey Business" and "Holiday"

Critique: "Monkey Business" and "Holiday" 4 years 3 months ago #1976

  • Roy van Ommen
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So, i went out last days on fun shoots. I did some photoshoots too, but also some fun stuff. I went to a zoo only for apes. Well, they have birds too, (don't ask me why.. but they have).

Here are some shots.

1

RVOFoto -5578 by RVOFoto, on Flickr

Camera: Canon EOS 60D
Exposure: 1/2500 sec
Aperture: f/4.0
Focal Length: 117 mm
ISO Speed: 400

2

RVOFoto -5552 by RVOFoto, on Flickr

Camera: Canon EOS 60D
Exposure: 1/400 sec
Aperture: f/4.0
Focal Length: 200 mm
ISO Speed: 400

3

RVOFoto -5799 by RVOFoto, on Flickr

Camera: Canon EOS 60D
Exposure: 1/1600 sec
Aperture: f/3.5
Focal Length: 200 mm
ISO Speed: 100

And these are shot in Antwerp and in Germany...

4

RVOFoto -5464 by RVOFoto, on Flickr

Camera: Canon EOS 60D
Exposure: 1/1000 sec
Aperture: f/4.0
Focal Length: 79 mm
ISO Speed: 100

5

RVOFoto -5397 by RVOFoto, on Flickr

Camera: Canon EOS 60D
Exposure: 1/500 sec
Aperture: f/8.0
Focal Length: 117 mm
ISO Speed: 100

6

RVOFoto -5412 by RVOFoto, on Flickr

Camera: Canon EOS 60D
Exposure: 1/1600 sec
Aperture: f/2.8
Focal Length: 200 mm
ISO Speed: 100

I know, 1 image too much.. i wanted to throw another one in, but maybe later. They are availbe on Flickr too btw :)

I like to hear from you guys what you think about it.

Greetings,
Roy
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Re: Critique: "Monkey Business" and "Holiday" 4 years 3 months ago #1980

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Awesome shots
Especially the photo of horse carriage.

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Re: Critique: "Monkey Business" and "Holiday" 4 years 3 months ago #1983

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Nice set Roy, here goes :)

1. Nice Shot, good focus on the eyes and great detail.

2. Technically well done, maybe a different composition with "looking room" to the right. Possible shot landscape vs portrait?

3. Again nice composition, focus and DOF, but the blown out sky in very distracting to me.

4.My favorite out of the set. Would have like to see a little more DOF the people in the shot look a little soft, I would have like to see everyone in the carriage in focus.

5.hummmm, technically well done, but I think the main subject is the ladder and you loose it at the crossing of the arms, maybe a different angle or possibly highlight the ladder?

6. Another good shot, this one seems to loose some of the details in the flowers. I'm not sure if it's a DOF or maybe the focus point? More contract maybe?

I hope you don't think I'm being harsh, just my $.02(well maybe .$04 worth :lol: )

-Bill
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