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My first paid contract 4 years 8 months ago #1177

  • Pat Belisle
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I've been asked by a school to take pictures for a brochure to show the courses they give...since it is one of my first contracts, I wanna have critiques to improve... All pic were shot using my D90, lit by a flash in a 20' softbox, edited in lightroom and are black and white because it is what the client wants...

It is my first paid contract and even the client is happy, I know it doesn't mean that my pictures are good... I know it is a boring contract but I like to think I managed to get nice pitures any way...what do you think?


mecanique par patletek, sur Flickr


mecanique-2 par patletek, sur Flickr


secrétariat par patletek, sur Flickr


secrétariat2 par patletek, sur Flickr


Soinsinfirmiébw4 par patletek, sur Flickr


SoinsinfirmiéBW3 par patletek, sur Flickr


SoinsinfirmiéBW2 par patletek, sur Flickr

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Re: My first paid contract 4 years 8 months ago #1189

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Congrats on getting your first 'paid' job..

I really like all the images & I think the B&W looks great. my only critique would be that a few of them look a bit too posed.. it may have been better if they were just getting on with what they were doing & not looking directly at you.

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Re: My first paid contract 4 years 8 months ago #1211

Photos are good, I'm not a fan of the colors. One or two might be ok but not all of them. The last image seems underexposed could use the shadows boosted a bit.
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Re: My first paid contract 4 years 8 months ago #1212

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Congrats, and good job. I think they all look a little dark. Shot #2 is dark and very busy. It's hard to tell what they are working on.
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