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Please critique! 4 years 8 months ago #1178

  • Anthony
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Just putting a few samples of some of my work. I've only been shooting since October so anything will only help me further.


IMG_5450.jpg

Canon EFS 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 IS II
ISO 100 @ 18mm
f 22
10 sec


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Canon EF 75-300mm 4-5.6 III USM
ISO 1000 @ 300mm
F 5.6
1/200 sec


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Canon EF 75-300mm 4-5.6 III USM
ISO 800 @ 75mm
f 4.5
1/200 sec


IMG_5121.jpg

Canon EF 75-300mm 4-5.6 III USM
ISO 100 @ 75mm
f 4
1/500 sec


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Canon EFS 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 IS II
ISO 400 @ 42mm
f 5
1/20 sec


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Canon EFS 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 IS II
ISO 400 42mm
f 11
1/100 sec
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Re: Please critique! 4 years 8 months ago #1187

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Hi Anthony.. Well done you for being brave enough to put you photos up for all to critique.

Here are my thoughts..

1: I love the colors in this & I think what you've captured is really good but I would prefer it if the top were not cut off.

2: Looks pretty average, would be better if you had got down on a lower level & maybe isolated just one duck.

3: I like the duck/goose standing tall & I like it in black & white, but I really don't like the backgroud.. try to get more bokeh (blurred background) or wait til he's standing in front of something more natural.

4: I really like this one...I think the colour is stunning.

5: A lovely moment captured but a very average shot, anyone could've taken this with any camera or phone. plus you've chopped off the baby hand.

6: This is cute, I like the angle but maybe crop in tighter & go black & white.

I hope this helps a little..I'm no expert but these are just my thoughts on the images.

Clair
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Re: Please critique! 4 years 8 months ago #1213

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Just a suggestion, but you might get more feedback if you post 1 at a time.
I'm a Canon 5D shooter.
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