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Critique please 4 years 4 months ago #1686

  • roy panaguiton
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hello everyone. long time no post :) i had a chance to shoot couple for engagement and models for the first time last saturday(meetup group). im using my nikon D5000 and tamron 28-75mm 2.8. tell me what you think? TY in advance

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July 14, 2012DSC_0233-Edit-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0447-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0437b by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0312-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr
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Re: Critique please 4 years 4 months ago #1687

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Hey there Roy!

I, too, have not posted in such a long time! :oops:

Anyways, I like the first shot as it is obscure enough to have a mystery for me to want to know more of the subject. Very interesting...

I also like the third shot, it's like "He said; She said" but in this case it's "His view; Her view"; very cool!

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Re: Critique please 4 years 4 months ago #1697

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Allright... hi there :)

Well, lets find some words for your work.

Euhm.. it will be like: "Cool!". I was looking like, oh! This is a nice one, oh, this one too, and this one too..

I mean, its not my style of taking a portrait, but hey! your style! And i love it. Looks very nice.

Keep on going. Love to see what you are creating next!

Greetings.
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Re: Critique please 4 years 4 months ago #1701

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ty for the kind words guys. was expecting for something worse :)

here some more from that same day shoot. couples are not models.

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July 14, 2012DSC_0291-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0110-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0176-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0432-Edit-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0169-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr

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July 14, 2012DSC_0315-Edit by mykevixen, on Flickr
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Critique please 4 years 4 months ago #1720

Second photo get rid of the white vignette...
Last Edit: 4 years 4 months ago by Gregory Cazillo.
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Re: Critique please 4 years 4 months ago #1726

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I really like number 2 (apart from the vignette)..& number 5 is great too.
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