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5 years 13 hours ago #1740 by Amitabh Chanda
Hi All,

Here are some snaps I took in New York. Would be great if you could comments to improve. Below is the flickr link

www.flickr.com/photos/75797375@N08/7563415844/in/photostream

Thanks,
Amitabh
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5 years 12 hours ago #1742 by Roy van Ommen
I love the first shot u uploaded to the forum :)

The second one is just a bit off for me.. i would have leveled the camera and used the most wide zoom you have.. but leveled the camera with the horizon.

Maybe you could level it a little bit with post processing..

To be honest, looks like you made it with your iphone in front of you while your friend is poking you and you clicked the shutter button... :)

Haha...

Greetings,
Roy
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5 years 12 hours ago #1745 by Amitabh Chanda
Hi Roy,

Thanks again for the comments. Yes I was trying to capture the hoarding and lighting, also was not using a tripod. Did processed in lightroom, tried my best but couldn't get rid of the grains. :(

Can I change the levelling in lightroom?

Regards,
Amitabh

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5 years 12 hours ago - 5 years 12 hours ago #1746 by Roy van Ommen
Hi.

Well, not exactly the leveling. But you can change the tilting of the camera a little bit.

I looked through your settings u used. U were @ 1/320 sec. Damn.. you could go lower in your ISO from 4000 to maybe, to 3200 so it cuts some grain out. Even though the grain isnt anoying me..

I did a quick edit on your image to tilt it back.. But you were holding your camera a bit up which deformes the buildings and the streets and the people... :)

So... Next time. Hold your camera just forward. And try to not tilt it.

Greetings.
Roy


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5 years 11 hours ago #1747 by Amitabh Chanda
Thanks again Roy!!!
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5 years 11 hours ago #1748 by Roy van Ommen
I hope u can use some of my critique.. :)

And because you say thanks so many times, i gave you +1 karma :p

So thanks :)

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4 years 6 months ago #2593 by Amitabh Chanda
Hi,

Adding few more recent clicks. :)


DSC_0902 by amitabhchanda , on Flickr


DSC_0930 by amitabhchanda , on Flickr


DSC_0947 by amitabhchanda , on Flickr


DSC_0950 by amitabhchanda , on Flickr


DSC_0969 by amitabhchanda , on Flickr


DSC_1022 by amitabhchanda , on Flickr


DSC_1188 by amitabhchanda , on Flickr

As always thanks in advance for your suggestions :)

Amitabh

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4 years 6 months ago #2799 by Matthew
I really like the last two photos you posted. Nice colors.

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4 years 6 months ago #2815 by Amitabh Chanda
thanks Matthew

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