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8:32 AM 2 years 8 months ago #5711

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Canon EOS REBEL T3i
Exposure 0.005 sec (1/200)
Aperture f/9.0
Focal Length 55 mm
ISO Speed 100


sunrise by damondecker1977, on Flickr

Could you all critique this. Thankyou
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8:32 AM 2 years 8 months ago #5712

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I don't know, to me there is to much shadow and not enough sunrise. I know this is a sunrise, but I see to many similar sunsets that are like this and really doesn't have that "wow" factor.

Perhaps having some detail in the shadows would help some.
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8:32 AM 2 years 8 months ago #5715

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because you are doing a silhouette, the buildings look like crop boxes.
The shot would improve without the buildings and with more focus on the sky

hmmm I have something like this but my focus was off :C this is the framing i'd go for though



Keep in mind this is a single frame from a bracket, unedited
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