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A short story to critique 4 years 9 months ago #1179

  • Massimo Caroelli
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Somebody someday told me to enclose a story in my shots: this is my first serious attempt.
What you think? A critique could a good starting point..
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A short story to critique 4 years 9 months ago #1180

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A better link to the image, sorry for double posthttp://www.flickr.com/photos/61580989@N07/6802623426
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Re: A short story to critique 4 years 9 months ago #1186

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Hi Massimo. I'm certainly no expert but I really like what you've done. I agree it is nice to put something together which tells a story.

Here's my critique..

Firstly I don't think the black & white image at the end fits in that well, I think it'd look better if it were colour like the rest.

Secondly you don't have a white gap between the first two images like you do on the rest which irritates me slightly.

Clair x
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A short story to critique 4 years 9 months ago #1199

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Thanx Claire! Really appreciated words from you.... I only chose the wrong file: I've now realised that I have three copies of it and one has correct stripes on all frames. About st Antony there was only "more drama" in the black and white version but I agree with your critique

Thanx again!
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