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Dew 4 years 5 months ago #1604

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Nikon D300
Nikon sb 600 fill flash

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Nikon 85 micro
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Last Edit: 4 years 5 months ago by Dennis. Reason: another image
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Re: Dew 4 years 5 months ago #1609

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Overall I like them. Although the second one could be a tad brighter, maybe try shutter dragging (1/125, 1/60 or maybe slower) to pick up some ambient light.

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Re: Dew 4 years 5 months ago #1610

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Thanks for the comment Andrew!


I could easily add some light to the 2nd image, but chose to keep the lighting a bit low, accentuating the Iris and maintaining the greenery in a subtle, subdued green
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Re: Dew 4 years 4 months ago #1663

The second looks a little underexposed.
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Re: Dew 4 years 4 months ago #1669

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Like said before, the second could use a little kick. Maybe try to get a slower shutter speed to catch some light. Maybe you can sort it out in your post-processing..

The first one, looks nice and sharp, but in my opinion i would frame it like the whole flower is in the frame..

Good luck. Hope to see more of your work soon!

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Roy
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