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A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC
Lets critique them one by one
Picture one. Nice, good lighting, nice sharpness. A so called "real" image.
Image two is like.. Yeah. Nice shot.. Very light background which distracts me a bit...
You can feel some fun here. But the first thing i did when i was looking to this image is tilting my head.. which is anoying for me as viewer. Try to level the camera and try not to tilt the camera while photographing.
And.. try to catch some light of the surrounding.. It is blown out now with everything very light. Would loved if there were some club lights.
Same story.. blown out with the flash. I would personally found a lower position on "eye height"and framed it a little more close..
Good.. Even though it would be more intresting if she was looking into your camera...
Sorry.. did not want to be harsh on you. It is just my opinion..
Greetings and keep on shooting.
Maybe if you make your shutter speed faster, and try to controll more of your flash, the flash will expose the person in front of the camera, and leave the background with the ambient light...
But that needs some practice...
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