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TOPIC: A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC

A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC 4 years 4 months ago #1735


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Re: A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC 4 years 4 months ago #1744

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Hi there,

Lets critique them one by one ;)

Picture one. Nice, good lighting, nice sharpness. A so called "real" image.

Image two is like.. Yeah. Nice shot.. Very light background which distracts me a bit...

Image 3..
You can feel some fun here. But the first thing i did when i was looking to this image is tilting my head.. which is anoying for me as viewer. Try to level the camera and try not to tilt the camera while photographing.

And.. try to catch some light of the surrounding.. It is blown out now with everything very light. Would loved if there were some club lights.

Image 4
Same story.. blown out with the flash. I would personally found a lower position on "eye height"and framed it a little more close..

Image 5
Good.. Even though it would be more intresting if she was looking into your camera...

Sorry.. did not want to be harsh on you. It is just my opinion..

Greetings and keep on shooting.
Roy
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Re: A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC 4 years 4 months ago #1773

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Number one is the best of the bunch in my opinion..
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A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC 4 years 4 months ago #1809

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If you can step it up with more than just bounce flash that would help dramatically.
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Re: A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC 4 years 4 months ago #1813

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I had another idea for you...

Maybe if you make your shutter speed faster, and try to controll more of your flash, the flash will expose the person in front of the camera, and leave the background with the ambient light...

But that needs some practice...

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A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC 4 years 4 months ago #1827

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I think you meant slower shutter which will bring in more ambient.
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Re: A couple of Shots at the Club RSVP in NYC 4 years 4 months ago #1834

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Gregory Cazillo wrote:
I think you meant slower shutter which will bring in more ambient.

Sorry! I meant Slower indeed!
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